I like the surreal dreamlike aesthetic of this spread. But it does not work because I need to be clearer what I am trying to say. It started out with the picture of the shampoo bottles looking like a 3 some. Then I was playing with the collage to make a face from some left over bits. And at some point I wanted to put the private sign. I want to pur text about the fact that this was originally a pilchard cellar, and would have had fish oil slurry all over the floor. I need to simplify it, and maybe split the elements into two more focused images. Maybe it should also go somewhere else in the sequence as it does not really fit.